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Grave of the fireflies

Story:
I can't say anything about the story itself without spoiling it, but the it's about how it could have gone for an average japanese family during World War II, truly shows how there are no ''good'' or ''evil'' in war.
Good things:This is the most dramatic movie that I have seen, it was truly heartbreaking, it's realistic up to the brutal point and it tells the story in an efficent way with good pacing, animation and characters.
The older brother really struggles and you can see how what he is going through is affecting him and his younger sister.
Bad things:It is a very specific movie, if you want action, horror or anything like that you won't enjoy this, but if you like it, you really like it.
Improvements:This movie did what it wanted to, I don't thing you could really improve it.
Conclusion:
You will either really like this movie or really hate it, but it is well made and put togheter in a good way, the characters are great and so are the visuals, nothing groundbreaking, but it wasn't supposed to be.
9/10

Real steel

Story:The story of this movie is a lot like Rocky, in the future wrestling is very famous, but it's done by robots instead of humans.
The main character loses his robot by accident in a match and the only way he could get money to buy a new one is to watch over his own kid, who he left eleven years ago, for the summer.
Whit the money he gets he buys a very powerfull new robot, but because he didn't know the interface, it was also destroyed in a battle, I can't say any more whitout spoiling the story.
Good things:Despite being similar to Rocky, it does change the story up a bit by adding some family problems, they are actually pretty well made and they add a layer to the story.
The fights and general animation of the robots are great, the final fight scene was great and pretty emotional too.
The relations between the characters weren't forced, most of the time.
Robots!
Bad things:Way to predictable, I could guess the whole story from the start and I said it differented from Rocky with some things, but the pacing, story and shooting is way to similar.
The villains were pretty uninteresting, they didn't talk alot, one good thing about them though, was that they weren't really villains.
The texan guy, I want to punch him in the face.
It ended to suddenly, right after the fight, no epilouge, nothing!
Improvements:I want a sequel to the movie, I really do, it has great potential.
Make some off the stage fights, not all fights have to be in the ring, having a final fight outside the ring where the main characters lives could depend on the outcome would be great to see and much more intense.
You have giant fighting robots, the shouldn't all be humanoids, the robots were great but it would be awesome to see some robots with more legs or arms, maybe just a very large one, they are all to similar.
Conclusion:
Similar to Rocky in many ways but still different in some makes a good combo, but it would have been better if it tried to be its own movie, it was also way too predictable, I would have loved to see some plot twists.
The action was good and the robots were fun, so if you can see it in a cheap way, go ahead!
6/10

Once in a lifetime, 1-3

Once in a lifetime

Prologue: Mechanic

Admiral Dean walked in to his office, it was a pretty large room, for an office that is, there was some plain white paint on the walls and roof with a nice brown carpet covering the floor and a nice window behind my steel desk.
In the window you could see another building, mostly grey with some large white lines to indicate where the different offices where, most of them also had a window identical to mine, but between the buildings there was a little garden to look at.

Dean pulled out his little chair, it was a standard office chair but it was very comfortable and sturdy.
He then sat down and opened up his green laptop and pressed the power button, typed in the password ‘’Leanehound’’.

Leane was his wife and he loved dogs, he always had one.
The laptop started and automatically opened his folder of messages from work, there was only one.Assault on the outer Colleral space dock
-General Meadow

Colleral was the name of an aggressive species that had initiated a war with the human, the message read:

We need another mechanic to fix the mechs in time for the assault, I have to supervise the progress so you have to find a mechanic and send him here ASAP.

He doesn’t have to be anything special; we just need someone who can follow orders.Dean proceeded to look at available crew in the Nebula, the human space explorers.
Several buttons appeared:
Captains:
Medical officers:
Medical crew:
Mechanic officers:
Mechanic crew:

That was the one he needed, before bothering to look at the rest, thirty available crew showed up, four recommended, he read the recommended first.

Mange Orique:

Performance: A very experienced mechanic who has been on sixteen short missions and two long missions, mostly a hard worker but can get very frightened when things are really at stake.

Age: 42

Derok Goldheim

Performance: A very high tempered mechanic who doesn’t go on long missions because others don’t like being around him for long, otherwise a very good mechanic who is rarely afraid, twenty-five short missions.

Age: 37

Linda Forsée

Performance: A self-confident mechanic who also studied science for a period of time, a fast worker but has a hard time following orders but still gets the job done most of the time, very good at improvising.
Nine short mission and one long mission.

Age: 27

Venus Dimm

Perfomance: A stunning mechanic with high expectations, still very young and not in full understanding of everything, he can do a good job inside his knowledge and he follows orders, two short missions.

Age: 24

Dean considered all of them.
Orique could be a good choice but this mission was in a dangerous zone, if the enemies were to attack he could be a lot less usefull.
Goldheim was a no, this was only a short mission so they shouldn’t need someone who could disturb the others, were at a tight schedule already.
Forsée was a good choice but in the end he went with Dimm, this could be a good chance to see his potential and he was good at following orders, which could really be needed in this tight schedule they had.

Chapter one: Cold before the storm

-WAKE UP VENUS! A female voice said.
-Wha? Venus replied as he slowly regained consciousness.
-Venus it’s nine already! The voice said.
-Mira, the academy lessons doesn’t start until evening today, Venus said.

‘’I know, but I saw you had a new assignment.’’
‘’Didn’t I tell you to stop looking at my laptop?’’
‘’It was an accident, I promise.’’
‘’whatever, let me check it.’’

Venus quickly goes out of the bed and stands in his and Miras Bedroom, it was mostly white on the walls and the roof, but the bed was black and so was most of the furniture, Mira thought it was ‘’artistic’’.
He walked into a restroom right beside the bedroom.

It was a standard white restroom with a shower, toilet and a washbasin, nothing special; he put on his clothing in a flash and hurried out into his office, a standard little home office with a desk, laptop and a lamp.

He hurried over to the desk and pulled out the small black office chair and sat down.

His laptop was already on, considering Mira knew what was on it, it wasn’t a big surprise.
The work folder opened as always and he saw the new message:

Outer Nebula station requires assistance
-Admiral Dean

You are needed in the Outer Nebula station, information is classified.
A small transport ship will pick you up at the academy, twelve hundred o clock.
Don’t be late.

This was amazing, missions were more fun than just studying at the academy, he was very excited for the mission.

-I will leave around eleven, Mira, Venus said.
-What are you supposed to do, nothing dangerous, right? Mira asked.

-It’s classified, but you know Nebula has security as their high- Venus replied when Mira interrupted and said: -est priority and bla bla bla, you said that a few hundred times.

‘’Just saying that I’m returning in one piece, maybe two if you get lucky.’’
‘’Then you would have to be a little richer.’’
‘’Well, people studying don’t usually get much money for it, remember how much they gave you when you went to school?’’

‘’No?’’
‘’You see? They usually don’t get paid very much.’’

Mira appeared in the doorway and said: ‘’Hope you have a good trip, I’ll miss you’’
Venus stood up and said: ’’I’ll miss you too Mira, I don’t think it’s a very long assignment though, they save them for people who actually finished the academy’’
‘’You’re close Venus, you know that, anyways, I have work to bye!’’
‘’Bye!’’

Mira left the doorway and Venus heard the door open and close a little later, he should probably get ready to leave too.
Two hours later Venus was on the transport ship.
-Can you tell me my assignment pilot? Venus yelled.

-Negative, I haven’t heard what it is, the pilot replied.

A few hours later the ship arrived and Venus stepped of and the ship took off again instantly, must be a tight schedule.

Venus was greeted by the chief mechanic.

-Welcome, you must be Dimm, was it? The mechanic said.

-Yes I’m Dimm, chief mechanic, Venus replied quickly.

-Call me Arale, I need you to follow me.

Venus followed Arale through the space station, it was mostly grey walls but there was lots of crewmembers aboard so it didn’t feel alone, eventually there was also a door in the wall, it was still a large corridor at least 3 meters tall, which was probably an indication of the station being large.

After some time they saw a large door in the side with a sign saying ‘’Mech bay’’ above it, Arale went over and pulled the door open and as Arale and Venus walked through Venus saw the amazing room.

It was at least 20 meters tall, lots of people walked around and appeared to be building mechs, the huge metallic vehicles were all along the walls, there were also second floors on the sides of the room with another layer of mechs.

-I need you to go upstairs on the left and help Kim and Nina fixing the 3’rd mech from the right, they will brief you in what to do, Arale said.

-Right after that a woman ran over to Arale and said: ‘’Sir, were running out of time, they’re almost here!’’

Chapter 2: Eye of the storm

-Who is almost here!? Venus yelled; ‘’Why wasn’t I briefed!?’’
-VENUS! Arale yelled in return; ‘’How close are they Alice?’’
‘’They should be here in 20 minutes, sir’’
-SHUT UP! Venus yelled; ‘’I have a fiancée at home and a bright future ahead of me, again why wasn’t I briefed!?’’
-VENUS WE DON’T HAVE TIME FOR THIS! Arale yelled; ‘’How many mechs will be done before they arrive?’’
-You might be superior officer but I won’t accept this! Venus yelled; ‘’Why wasn’t I warned about this!?’’
-For Christs sake, Arale said and after a little pause he continued; ‘’It’s the Colleral, they weren’t supposed to come and you weren’t supposed to be here when we started the attack’’
-Why wa- Venus said when Arale stopped him and said; ‘’It doesn’t matter now, we can’t do anything.’’
-Okay Alice, how many mechs? Arale asked.
‘’We should have ar-‘’ Alice said when all of sudden a huge explosion came from the big gate to space at the end of the bay and flooded almost the entire bay.
Venus quickly ran against the door, Alice and Arale following close after him, when he reached the door he realized that they could not lose the Outer Nebula Station, that could cost them a great tactical location and lots of resources, way too many.

-Arale, evacuate, you’re the ranking officer, they need you more than they need me! Venus said as he noticed small pods, probably filled with Colleral soldiers flying right into the bay.
When Venus most officers would have said something like ‘’I should go down with the ship, not you’’ or ‘’I command you to go, I’ll stay’’ but Arale wasn’t stubborn or naïve, he just left with Alice, who Venus noticed had a huge bruise on her chin.

Venus realized that his chance of survival was very low but the needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few, he saw a large wrench close by and decided it was the best kind of weapon around here, if he couldn’t reach a working mech.

He saw a mech, unfortunately it was on the second floor, he quickly ran over and grabbed the wrench then proceeded to quickly looked around, he noticed that the smoke the explosion had left covered a lot of the area but because the station could automatically block out breaches with force fields but I had to thing quickly, the force fields didn’t have unlimited energy.

I started sprinting for the ladder to the small second floor as the smoke seemed to provide cover but it also covered the Colleral, when I had almost reached the ladder I tripped over something and fell, quickly standing up because of the situation required it, he then quickly turned around and saw what tripped him.
It was a Colleral, it was also about to stand up, it was much taller than Venus, around 2.1 meters tall he assumed, slightly red skin and the some bones sticking out around the neck.

It was also covered in what looked like combat armor, grey with the Colleral sign on the kneepads and a helm covering the entire head with a small visor around the eyes, Colleral could breathe the same air as humans could but it slightly weakened them so they preferred the suits.

Before the humanoid could completely stand up Venus proceeded to hit it in the visor as hard as he could with the wrench, it broke and it was very shocked, the glass from the visor should make it even more troubling for it though.

The mech was more important than completely killing it so Venus quickly jumped on the ladder and started climbing it as quickly as he could but then he noticed that he had taken some small damage from the fall, making it troubling to climb but he still did it pretty fast.
As soon as he reached the top he jumped for the mech, it was tall and he would have a hard time climbing it, usually you had time and no aliens shooting at you…
The wounds would also be troubling but nothing he couldn’t handle.

As he started to climb the mech he noticed that he was completely detected, bullets flew all around him, lucky that the Colleral still used some pretty low-tech weapons as he reached the top of the mech he still hadn’t been hit which was very fortunate, he jumped into the seat and pressed the initiate button, a visor sled down in front of him, he heard the friendly robotic-male voice saying: ‘’All systems active, taking fire’’

None of those weapons could penetrate but if their  ship fired at him he could be in trouble, if they had a ship of course, only the small shuttles had been confirmed.

He powered the weapons, they were big and had highly explosive rounds, it would easily be able to defeat the enemies in the room, and he didn’t know how many were outside though.
He pulled the trigger and the gatling gun like barrels started spinning, shortly after the bullets flew out and in a matter of seconds he had laid waste to the entire room, there didn’t seem to be any more living Colleral so he proceeded to activate the thrusters.

He quickly came over to the breach and the force field could easily be flown through, he was out in space in a matter of seconds.

He could see lots of stars and a huge purple nebula close by, that is how the station got its name, but he quickly noticed some pretty well camouflaged ships, shortly after he saw how large they were and that he had almost no chance to defeat them, even smaller one to escape.

While thinking about whether to engage or try to escape he didn’t notice that one ship had already detected him and was preparing weapons, Venus saw the missile  just as it was about to hit him, but he couldn’t evade it.

After the missile impacted Venus noticed that he was still alive and conscious but barely, as his vision darkened he heard the friendly male voice from the mechs computer was talking.

-Weapon systems down, navigational systems down, medical support failing, power failing, the computer said before there was too little power, it was automatically redirected to medical support.

A few moments later his vision darkened completely.

Chapter 3: Permanent

Surprisingly, Venus opened his eyes again, everything was a little blurry but he thought he was in a spaceship with lots of other people; he started to hear lots of different voices.

All of sudden something grabbed his neck and turned his head, he looked at what he thought was some ones face.
-Dimm! A familiar voice said; ‘’It’s me, Arale!’’

-How? Venus tried to say and he thought it was understandable.
‘’Our escape shuttle was captured, I don’t know what they did to Alice but I think she is alive.’’

‘’What is this?’’
‘’You probably haven’t noticed yet but your hands are chained to the seat, I think this is some kind of prison transport, but I haven’t seen any guards, only this empty room with locked doors and a few windows.’’

Venus vision began to clear up, he also felt the chains on his hands, and there were also some on his feet.
 

-How many others are here? Venus asked.
‘’By my count 40, but I can’t see behind me.’’
‘’Any escape plans?’’
‘’No, we can’t do anything.’’

All of sudden a high pitched voice left of Venus yelled: ‘’Hey everyone! They’re closing in on a planet, I think were arriving!’’
Venus looked over against the voice and noticed it was a pretty small man sitting close by a window, he was bald and wearing a green shirt, Venus couldn’t make out his pants though.

Venus started hearing low chatter around him; it was probably about the planet.

After some time the starship shook a little and then stopped, they had arrived.

A purely robotic voice quickly said: ‘’This is where you will be living permanently.’’
All of sudden the chains opened and everyone stood up and started walking against the left wall, including Venus, when he was walking he felt something stinging in the neck, but not when he stood still, he assumed it was something that controlled some of his brain functions.

After some time the wall opened and everyone started walking through into large hallway of glass, through the glass they could see the planets surface and surprisingly for a prison planet it had a little of life, It was like one of the rainforests from earth, just in a much larger scale, the trees were absolutely huge and he could see animals everywhere, here could mostly see insects but he assumed there were some other, larger animals around.

Shortly after they passed the hallway and now all the walls were just grey with lots of doors in the sides and one person went through each door, after some time Venus wished he could go through a door soon, his legs were tired and wanted something to happen.

As people went through the doors Venus noticed how the numbers diminished and soon there was almost no one left, when Arale left there was only four other people left, including Venus, it felt like the doors got further and further away.

Shortly after the others left too and Venus was the only one left, he finally went through a door, he came inside a little room with a small light on the roof, a very uncomfortable looking bed and a small chair next to a table standing next to the wall, there was a hole in the wall right above the table and a little dish standing in front of the hole.
On the dish there was what looked like some food, he couldn’t see what though, and a glass of water, this is very he would be living for the rest of his life.

Venus noticed how hungry he washed and pulled out the chair a little and sat down, there was no knife or fork so he assumed he had to eat with his hands, he took a bit of the weird brown square food and ate, it was very dry and tasted horribly, he tried the water and hoped it wasn’t as dry as the food, it wasn’t it was just plain water.

After eating his neck started hurting a lot, he raised his hands and tried to cover the pain but as soon as his hands got close to his neck he heard static and his hands were struck by what felt like lightning, the pain got worse and worse but in the process it felt like it moved away, after a short time that felt like an eternity he felt a very painful sting and then heard something land, he quickly turned around, fighting the pain.

As he initially looked around nothing was there but when h looked down he saw some kind of small robot with four legs, it must have been the thing controlling him earlier, he tried to smash it with his left foot but it evaded the attack and ran in under the table, Venus jumped down on the floor and looked under the table as he saw nothing but a little hole, it must have been planned.

After that he decided he had nothing else to do but to go to sleep, he stood up from the floor and slowly got into the bed, it was very uncomfortable but he had nothing else to do.

He couldn’t stop thinking about the days events but eventually he fell asleep.

Venus woke up, he didn’t know for how long he had been here but he estimated six days, some of the food came in through the hole every couple of hours and he noticed he could just get rid of the dishes by throwing them back into the hole, but it was too small for him to climb through.

He sat down on the chair and put his hands on his face with his elbows on the table, he couldn’t believe his life had come to this, he had thought about trying to kill himself by throwing himself against the walls or starving himself but he didn’t want to give up hope yet, there were people waiting for him at home and he was planning to see them again.

Something was different today though, he couldn’t point his finger on what it was, what could be different anyways?

Then he heard it, it was a small wooshing sound, he didn’t know where it came from, he checked every inch of his room, he even checked if the odd robotic thing had placed itself on his neck again, but nothing, yet the sound kept getting louder.

Chapter 4: Impact

Soon after another sound appeared, it sounded like an engine, but not like one Venus had ever heard, the engine sound was also becoming louder quickly and he couldn’t guess what was going on, as the sounds become louder and louder he suspected it was because whatever was causing them was getting closer.

Then suddenly the sounds completely stopped but now Venus shortly heard a sound, he couldn’t guess what it was before a huge explosion tore the wall open and knocked him over, he managed to stay conscious and stood up again, when he looked out he saw a lot of the rainforest area he had seen before but a pretty far away he saw a large barren area, in the middle there was something odd, probably a meteorite, but then he heard a weird pulsing sound.

Whit no other options, Venus decided to go check it out, it might be able to help him out somehow, there wasn’t very far down to the ground so Venus just jumped down, as he landed he could feel the dust fly around him, felt so nice to finally be on real earth again.
Looking up he saw the sun of this planet, he had really missed it, he also noticed that it was pretty hot, nothing to be worried about though.

He looked forward and the landscapes beauty caught him, it was like a large rainforest with lots of colors, the trees stood very tall in the air and there were lots of flowers and other plants on the ground, he also noticed lots of small insects, he also noticed an odd smell, he couldn’t make out what it was.

He had to continue, the landscape wasn’t very important, he started walking, he felt heavy, it was probably the planets gravity,

Friendship 4

Chapter 4: Trouble is chasing me!

After a short while they arrived at the blacksmith.

-What do you want, Said the Smith

-To craft weapons for money, Said Reretzu

-Kid, Said the Smith: I think you should wait three years.

-I don’t know your name but I do know that this is much more serious than you think and if you don’t let us help this city might be the one stormed with fireballs tomorrow, Said Reretzu, fast and calm.

-If you can craft a weapon that can break this piece of wood, Said the Smith and pulled out an averagely thick piece of wood: I will give you 200 gold coins and a chance to earn more.

Reretzu pulls out Wrath and says: I forged this myself. Then with 1 quick stroke the wood was cut in two pieces.

-Impressive but I don’t know if you made it, Said the smith

-You don’t have proof to us that you can do better, said Razmo

-Well then take this to the barracks, Said the smith and took up a bag of weapons: they needed a little cut, oh and here is the 200 coins.

-Okay, Said Reretzu

Reretzu and Razmo left the blacksmith.

-What an easy task. Said Reretzu just as somebody grabbed his arm and said: just give me all gold and this won’t be so hard, a voice said

2 Guys walked up forward to him and somebody grabbed Razmo too.

-Seriously? Said Reretzu and used his magic to make lighting appear all over him stunning all four, but he evaded Razmo, then he pulled out Wrath and quickly made a spinning slash highly damaging all four.

-Then Reretzu threw one gold coin at the face of the guy that grabbed him and said: you’re right it was easy.

The man didn’t answer because he was very hurt.

Then Reretzu just kept walking and Razmo said: Nice, but I could do the same with fire.

-I did it with lighting and that’s what happened, Reretzu replied: and I know you could have done it with fire Razmo, I don’t think my best friend is an idiot.

-Guess so, Said Razmo

Later when Reretzu and Razmo arrived at the barracks.

They walked inside and saw 4 troops with some light armor and 1 with heavy armor.

-What the hell? Said the one with heavy armor: Two kids just entered.

-Kids you need to be at least 19 years old to become a soldier, one of the other four said

-I’m here to deliver some weapons, Said Reretzu and gave the soldier with heavy armor the weapons

-Sure… Said the one with heavy armor and started walking away

Reretzu grabbed his shoulder and said: you forgot to pay me.

-The military needs money more than a pair of kids, the one with heavy armor said

-Why should I then deliver these weapons to you? Said Reretzu

-Because we work hard for this country while all you do is probably lay around all day and have fun, Said the one with heavy armor.

-I’m so tired of this, Said Reretzu: WHY DOES EVERY ADULT HAVE TO BE AN ASSHOLE, then he punched the guard who fell to the floor and started bleeding out of the nose.

Two guards quickly helped him up.

-What the hell, Said A guard with light armor: how did he make Lewis bleed I mean even we have a hard time doing that.

-I never knew my parents, the town I live in is completely destroyed so I only have one friend left and since then my travel has only been a nightmare since every effing adult acts like you assholes I need money to get food now while you get armor and food for free, Said Reretzu very angrily

-… There’s not so many kids like you, Said a light armored soldier quietly.

-But he still broke the law, Said Lewis smiling: He assaulted me and that’s enough for prison.

-…Stealing too, Said Reretzu in an angry tone.

Lewis started looking angry.

-What the hell kid?! You just come in here and think you deserve money, then you assault us and claims I’m stealing I’m a veteran I have survived several battles and still get sent to more and you think you should have a reward for giving us some weapons, Said Lewis

-Yes, he does, Said Razmo: and he has a good reason for it, since the rain our lives have been miserable and we got nothing now were working and still nothing, at least your family didn’t die while you were there as a kid and you knew them at least Reretzu did not.

Then Razmo fisted his hands and looked deeply on Lewis.

-Now you’re talking to huh? Said Lewis: just get away from here.

-I still don’t have our money, Said Reretzu and looked angrily on Lewis

-This is driving me crazy, Said Lewis: I guess I will throw you out in pieces, and pulled out a giant sword.

Friendship

Chapter 3: Am I a Psycho?

-Why did you run here anyway Reretzu? Said Razmo

-I chased the shadow, Said Reretzu

Razmo stopped: What Shadow?

-Didn’t you see it; it was right in front of us, Said Reretzu

-Reretzu there was no shadow stop making things up, Said Razmo

-YES THERE WAS, Yelled Reretzu: I don’t understand it, why can’t our lives just go on as normal!?

-I DON’T WANT THIS TO HAPPEN EITHER BUT IT DID, Yelled Razmo

Then they stared into each other’s eyes, they could see fear but would not say it.

-Let’s just go on, Whispered Reretzu

When they reached town everything was in ruins but since all people weren’t in buildings there were survivors.

-Our town is in ruin, we have to tell this to the Raid leaders so that we can be more prepared next time, Said Razmo

Reretzu was quiet and started walking down the road that went against Merkan, The capital of the Raid, Razmo followed.

Five hours later.

-We don’t have enough food for the rest of the journey; we need to stop in Shew and buy some food, Said Razmo: But we have no money.

-I’m sure I can get us some by crafting a weapon to the local blacksmith, Said Reretzu

-THERE IT IS, Yelled Reretzu and started running.

-What!? Yelled Razmo and ran after.

-The shadow, said Reretzu: don’t you see it?

-NO RERETZU I DON’T THE RECENT EVENTS HAVE DROVEN YOU CRAZY, STOP CHASING YOUR IMAGINATION, Yelled Razmo

The shadow disappeared and they were long away from Shew.

-Lets go to Ramn instead, then we don’t need to go back, said Reretzu

When they arrived ad Ramn they heard Shew had been attacked by a rain of fireballs and the survivors say a young boy threw a spell while the attack was going on.

-The shadow saved us… again, Said Reretzu

-There is NO shadow Reretzu, you’re just lucky, said Razmo

To the readers, if I actually have any.

If you read this, then you know it's a blog to upload prologues and previews but it wasn't supposed to be, this is a blog about my life and what happens but nothing happens, at all or well, nothing I think you would want to read.
I guess the books are just the only exciting thing that happens right now and if you read this, I thank you greatly for your support.

Webshow

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Oilspill

Chapter 2: Start of an Odyssey

After walking through the city for some time I came into a large open space, it was between four skyscrapers, it was filled with debris in the edges but not so much in the middle, it would be a bad location if I would encounter a strong creature and I decided it would be best to hurry.

I heard a loud growl, it came from behind and it wasn’t human or machine and it didn’t fit any pre-invasion animal recordings, this is bad.

There started coming loud footsteps, fast, they got louder and louder and came in pairs, I turned around and there was only debris.

All of sudden there came lots of smoke from the debris, I saw a huge shadow, it had four legs, a small head, a long neck and a large body, it would be able to destroy me in a single dash.

The smoke cleared and saw some stinging red eyes looking straight at me, it had the same mix of red and black as the stingers, its mouth was like a round hole.

It started running against me, could my mission end here? Fail? Already?

I started activating my bomb, it looked like it could be one of their higher ranking soldiers so it could be a good move to take one out with me, the counter started.

10

It was closing in, I stood up to it staring it right into the eyes, I knew the word fear but unlike humans I couldn’t feel it, I wasn’t programmed to.

9

It reached me, but instead of just crushing me, it put its foot on me making me fall to the ground, I took heavy damage, then it looked up.

8

It made a loud howl probably a victory howl.

7

All of sudden it started bleeding the blue ‘’blood’’ from both sides of the body, but only small amounts, it also stopped howling.

6

It started bleeding more and now I could hear it, someone fired bullets at the creature.

5

The creature looked to the side while it started bleeding more and more.

4

The creature howled, aggressively this time.

3

The creature fell over.

2

I stopped the bomb, I could barely move, but I decided that absorbing the creatures genetics might help.

I slowly crawled over to the weakened creature, I could hear footsteps from behind, it was probably the ones who saved me.

The creature slowly started regenerating I noticed, but I would still be able to absorb its genetics

The footsteps became louder and louder as I touched the creature…

Ideas!

I don't write books for money or fame or anything like that, I write it for fun!
One of the things that I like the most is to see my friends happy and I know that everyone who reads this is one of my friends.
If anyone of you have some ideas for existing books or want me to try something just say it I will at the very least try to follow an idea!

Friendship

Chapter 2: The world

Reretzu appeared in the world called Agereth, A cruel world for warriors and magicians, Reretzu appeared close to the town called Shivil, which is almost unknown in this world.

There are seven main armies owning 78% of the world, the other is owned by smaller armies, from order largest-smallest here are the main armies.

Royality: a very Nobel army, there’s been rumors of evil things happening inside the castle but outside they seem like a very basic army focusing on numbers.

WarCows: these are what the most people consider the ''evil army'' they have no mercy, burns villages and laugh in the process.

Dynami: the make machines, wonders but are weak in combat, these folks buy themselves from trouble or uses the highest technology weapons existing. (Warcows are trying to get their technology)

Steel: very tough people with giant hammers and swords, they could probably take Reretzus spear Qick with 1 hand.

Denemo: these are almost only rouges and thieves a powerful of the kind though they can kill you before you know they are after you, and do it painless

Skov: Rangers, hunters, you name it, they use bows and don’t like technology

Raid: these guys have few in numbers but much in strength they are fast, strong and deadly

Reretzus town is in a Raid area, there are no countries everything is based on the armies.

The technology in this world is pretty high but people still use swords and such instead of guns because they can counter guns with magic, also the Dynami has made some fantastic weapons, armors and other things.

I have to mention the unknown it’s an area where if you enter, you don’t come out so nobody knows what’s in there.

About the magic, in larger cities there are schools for it but in the smaller cities and towns it’s hard finding teachers, so you mostly just use the library and read whatever magic you can get.

The most basic magic is elemental magic like fire, thunder and ice but then there’s dual magic which is more advanced elemental magic mostly two fused elements so that you can make for example a burning tornado but it’s hard to pull off right and there’s also lots of other kinds of magic and people think that they haven’t found half of all the spells.

It's here...

Once in a lifetime

Prolugue: Mechanic

Admiral Dean walked in to his office, it was a pretty large room, for an office that is, there was some plain white paint on the walls and roof with a nice brown carpet covering the floor and a nice window behind my steel desk.
In the window you could see another building, mostly grey with some large white lines to indicate where the different offices where, most of them also had a window identical to mine, but between the buildings there was a little garden to look at.

Dean pulled out his little chair, it was a standard office chair but it was very comfortable and sturdy.
He then sat down and opened up his green laptop and pressed the power button, typed in the password ‘’Leanehound’’.

Leane was his wife and he loved dogs, he always had one.
The laptop started and automatically opened his folder of messages from work, there was only one.
Assault on the outer Colleral space dock
-General Meadow

Colleral was the name of an aggressive species that had initiated a war with the human, the message read:

We need another mechanic to fix the mechs in time for the assault, I have to supervise the progress so you have to find a mechanic and send him here ASAP.

He doesn’t have to be anything special; we just need someone who can follow orders.
Dean proceeded to look at available crew in the Nebula, the human space explorers.
Several buttons appeared:
Captains:
Medical officers:
Medical crew:
Mechanic officers:
Mechanic crew:

That was the one he needed, before bothering to look at the rest, thirty available crew showed up, four recommended, he read the recommended first.

Mange Orique:

Performance: A very experienced mechanic who has been on sixteen short missions and two long missions, mostly a hard worker but can get very frightened when things are really at stake.

Age: 42

Derok Goldheim

Performance: A very high tempered mechanic who doesn’t go on long missions because others don’t like being around him for long, otherwise a very good mechanic who is rarely afraid, twenty-five short missions.

Age: 37

Linda Forsée

Performance: A self-confident mechanic who also studied science for a period of time, a fast worker but has a hard time following orders but still gets the job done most of the time, very good at improvising.
Nine short mission and one long mission.

Age: 27

Venus Dimm

Perfomance: A stunning mechanic with high expectations, still very young and not in full understanding of everything, he can do a good job inside his knowledge and he follows orders, two short missions.

Age: 24

Dean considered all of them.
Orique could be a good choice but this mission was in a dangerous zone, if the enemies were to attack he could be a lot less usefull.
Goldheim was a no, this was only a short mission so they shouldn’t need someone who could disturb the others, were at a tight schedule already.
Forsée was a good choice but in the end he went with Dimm, this could be a good chance to see his potential and he was good at following orders, which could really be needed in this tight schedule they had.

Chapter one: Cold before the storm

-WAKE UP VENUS! A female voice said.
-Wha? Venus replied as he slowly regained consciousness.
-Venus it’s nine already! The voice said.
-Mira, the academy lessons doesn’t start until evening today, Venus said.

‘’I know, but I saw you had a new assignment.’’
‘’Didn’t I tell you to stop looking at my laptop?’’
‘’It was an accident, I promise.’’
‘’whatever, let me check it.’’

Venus quickly goes out of the bed and stands in his and Miras Bedroom, it was mostly white on the walls and the roof, but the bed was black and so was most of the furniture, Mira thought it was ‘’artistic’’.
He walked into a restroom right beside the bedroom.

It was a standard white restroom with a shower, toilet and a washbasin, nothing special; he put on his clothing in a flash and hurried out into his office, a standard little home office with a desk, laptop and a lamp.

He hurried over to the desk and pulled out the small black office chair and sat down.

His laptop was already on, considering Mira knew what was on it, it wasn’t a big surprise.
The work folder opened as always and he saw the new message:

Outer Nebula station requires assistance
-Admiral Dean

You are needed in the Outer Nebula station, information is classified.
A small transport ship will pick you up at the academy, twelve hundred o clock.
Don’t be late.

This was amazing, missions were more fun than just studying at the academy, he was very excited for the mission.

-I will leave around eleven, Mira, Venus said.
-What are you supposed to do, nothing dangerous, right? Mira asked.

-It’s classified, but you know Nebula has security as their high- Venus replied when Mira interrupted and said: -est priority and bla bla bla, you said that a few hundred times.

‘’Just saying that I’m returning in one piece, maybe two if you get lucky.’’
‘’Then you would have to be a little richer.’’
‘’Well, people studying don’t usually get much money for it, remember how much they gave you when you went to school?’’

‘’No?’’
‘’You see? They usually don’t get paid very much.’’

Mira appeared in the doorway and said: ‘’Hope you have a good trip, I’ll miss you’’
Venus stood up and said: ’’I’ll miss you too Mira, I don’t think it’s a very long assignment though, they save them for people who actually finished the academy’’
‘’You’re close Venus, you know that, anyways, I have work to bye!’’
‘’Bye!’’

Mira left the doorway and Venus heard the door open and close a little later, he should probably get ready to leave too.
Two hours later Venus was on the transport ship.
-Can you tell me my assignment pilot? Venus yelled.

-Negative, I haven’t heard what it is, the pilot replied.

A few hours later the ship arrived and Venus stepped of and the ship took off again instantly, must be a tight schedule.

Venus was greeted by the chief mechanic.

-Welcome, you must be Dimm, was it? The mechanic said.

-Yes I’m Dimm, chief mechanic, Venus replied quickly.

-Call me Arale, I need you to follow me.

Venus followed Arale through the space station, it was mostly grey walls but there was lots of crewmembers aboard so it didn’t feel alone, eventually there was also a door in the wall, it was still a large corridor at least 3 meters tall, which was probably an indication of the station being large.

After some time they saw a large door in the side with a sign saying ‘’Mech bay’’ above it, Arale went over and pulled the door open and as Arale and Venus walked through Venus saw the amazing room.

It was at least 20 meters tall, lots of people walked around and appeared to be building mechs, the huge metallic vehicles were all along the walls, there were also second floors on the sides of the room with another layer of mechs.

-I need you to go upstairs on the left and help  Kim and Nina fixing the 3’rd mech from the right, they will brief you in what to do, Arale said.

-Right after that a woman ran over to Arale and said: ‘’Sir were running out of time, they’re almost here!’’